From dberry Tue Jan  5 08:42:49 2016
To: pjgolomb@verizon.net
Subject: Marked up proof of our paper

Paul

Shana Chadasha Smeicha

Please find attached the proof file you sent all marked up using Acrobat's
markup tools. Please pay attention to all the cross off and all the
inserts. I tried to explain each one with a yellow stickie.

This is what I did with the two previous articles I published with the
RJQ. I hope that it is still accepteable. If ANYTHING is not clear, please
holler.

I used acrobat's file comparison tool to find all differences between what
you sent me and what we sent you.

Please find attached a new version of the figure that is MISSING from the
article even though it is mentioned on Page 107 (12). Since your text does
not talk about "Figure 1", I removed the text "Figure 1". I also made all
the text in the figure bigger so that the figure can be scaled to be
smaller without losing legibility. This way the figure can be made to fit
in a page that also has some text below it

** Because of all the changes and the possibility that they may not be clear,
** I want to see the corrected proof before giving approval and signing the
** copyright form.

Thank you,

Dan

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Dear Dan,

I am attaching the pdf of your and Karljurgenbs article for the Spring
2016 issue of the RJQ.  Since we are at the end of the process and a
thorough copy-editing has already been done, please check this galley
principally for typesetting errors.  Hold off on any stylistic changes,
please, unless they are minor.  Unless you are particularly good at
reading material on a screen, I suggest you print out a copy.  You can
send to me the emendations in a return email.  Just be specific about
both the change and location. (e.g. "Remove the comma after the word
'Israel' in the third sentence of the first full paragraph on page
36.")  If you think a change will be too hard to list, don't hesitate
to contact me at 845-489-6294, so you can talk me through the problem.

I would like to hold to the publishing timetable, so please try to get
back to me with any changes (or ideally a note informing me that no
change is necessary) by the middle of January.  I will need to hear
from every author before I can inform the printer (Publishing
Synthesis) of all the emendations.

Finally, be so kind as to confirm as soon as possible that you have
received the pdf of your article intact. Cyberspace can do weird
things.   Be especially sensitive to the Hebrew, as words and letters
occasionally get switched around.

Thank you for your contribution and prompt response, and best wishes in
all your endeavors.

l'Shalom, Paul